http://21012nataliekoh.blogspot.com/
Her blog is extremely comprehensive and she has even provided photographs of the food she ate. Her blog layout is simple, attractive and easy to navigate and read. She made analysis of the healthy food she ate, which would enable her to make better improvements to her diet. From the analysis, she has found out the causes of the unhealthy aspects of her diet (e.g. Ferrero Rocher). Overall, she is a healthy person with a good diet.
Low Yue Hui, Alyssa (19) 210
http://www.fnpt.blogspot.com/
Her blog layout is simple and easy to navigate and read. It is extremely comprehensive as she included a lot of analysis and reflections on her diet. She used her tools well (especially her food pyramid). From them, she has analysed the unhealthy aspects of her diet (e.g. too much protein, salt and oil), hence enabling her to make necessary adjustments to her diet. It is clear that she has gained much from this performance task as can be seen from her reflections (under the title of Learning Points). Overall, she needs to eat more vegetables but has a great appetite.
Lek Jie Ling, Jaslyn (15) 210
http://test89757.blogspot.com/
Her blog layout is simple and easy to navigate and read. The contents are entertaining, especially her personal comments. She gives good feedback on other people's blogs, such as mistakes in factual information. It would be ideal if she could organize her information more clearly, such as lay out her 3-day diet information in tables, and use more formality. Overall, it is an honest and interesting blog that conveys dietary habits in a fresh new style.
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